9.23.2008

Walk Alone

Four years wasted
A storm of fun passed and gone
Blurry eyes and a realization
A new begining
A smile and wink
Could this be love
Love of who I've become
Finally alone
Every choice
Every decision
All my own
Mistakes
Success
All credit to me
Grown
Moved
Finally

4 comments:

mike said...

I'm glad that you're trying to write some poetry. Now write some more!

Laura said...

I really enjoyed reading this. It was a bit of a surprise, thought I knew where it was going, another boring poem about loving a boyfriend, and I was very happily surprised. Refreshing and now you need to write another.

JiLly BeAn said...

it was really good, it was different :)

itSAMazing said...

i really love this especially how at the end it turns to just one word. sometimes one word is better than a sentence